Sunday, October 11, 2009

T.S. Eliot - The Hollow Men

Mistah Kurtz -- he dead.

A penny for the Old Guy

We are the hollow men

We are the stuffed men

Leaning together

Headpiece filled with straw. Alas!

Our dried voices, when

We whisper together

Are quiet and meaningless

As wind in dry grass

Or rats' feet over broken glass

In our dry cellar

Shape without form, shade without colour,

Paralysed force, gesture without motion;

Those who have crossed

With direct eyes, to death's other Kingdom

Remember us -- if at all -- not as lost

Violent souls, but only

As the hollow men

The stuffed men.

II

Eyes I dare not meet in dreams

In death's dream kingdom

These do not appear:

There, the eyes are

Sunlight on a broken column

There, is a tree swinging

And voices are

In the wind's singing

More distant and more solemn

Than a fading star.

Let me be no nearer

In death's dream kingdom

Let me also wear

Such deliberate disguises

Rat's coat, crowskin, crossed staves

In a field

Behaving as the wind behaves

No nearer --

Not that final meeting

In the twilight kingdom

III

This is the dead land

This is cactus land

Here the stone images

Are raised, here they receive

The supplication of a dead man's hand

Under the twinkle of a fading star.

Is it like this

In death's other kingdom

Waking alone

At the hour when we are

Trembling with tenderness

Lips that would kiss

Form prayers to broken stone.

IV

The eyes are not here

There are no eyes here

In this valley of dying stars

In this hollow valley

This broken jaw of our lost kingdoms

In this last of meeting places

We grope together

And avoid speech

Gathered on this beach of the tumid river

Sightless, unless

The eyes reappear

As the perpetual star

Multifoliate rose

Of death's twilight kingdom

The hope only

Of empty men.

V

Here we go round the prickly pear

Prickly pear prickly pear

Here we go round the prickly pear

At five o'clock in the morning.

Between the idea

And the reality

Between the motion

And the act

Falls the Shadow

For Thine is the Kingdom

Between the conception

And the creation

Between the emotion

And the response

Falls the Shadow

Life is very long

Between the desire

And the spasm

Between the potency

And the existence

Between the essence

And the descent

Falls the Shadow

For Thine is the Kingdom

For Thine is

Life is

For Thine is the


This is the way the world ends

This is the way the world ends

This is the way the world ends

Not with a bang but a whimper.

What a dense, dark, and sober piece of writing. Here are some of my emotional and conceptual responses to the poem, along with some possible ways of expressing them visually.

detachment – there is a sense of distance, and a desire to remain far away

· I should find a way to remove my viewers from my photographs. Things should not be seen directly, they should not be instantly recognizable in any way.

· Another way of looking at detachment in disconnection, perhaps playing with either physical cropping or the cropping / combination of photographs

· Shooting in a place of emptiness, impersonality, purgatory

emptiness- the men lack meaning, there heads are filled with straw. They exist in a godless purgatory, they are not violent instead they are hollow.

· Be careful not to make anything too much of a subject. A subject has inherent meaning and value.

· Consider the amount of space, perhaps consider photographing negative space primarily, positive space secondarily

apathy- the men in the poem are not in any state of fear, longing, anger, or violence. They exist indifferently.

· A setting that is cold and indifferent will help here, also pay attention to themes of detachment

fragmentation- many segments are only parts of a whole, such as the fragmented “For Thine Is”

· Ways in which I can fragment the picture plane, distort “reality”, use a mirror as a tool for abstraction

· Perhaps further fragmentation on the computer

· Emphasize subjectivity and ambiguity, odd compositions.

Solemn- seriousness, questioning of existence,

· Dark lighting situations

· Muted color palate

· Perversion of ideal, childhood